tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3010516876243855590.post2968658744176453798..comments2024-03-23T14:02:34.764+05:30Comments on Klishmaklaver: The man in the wall mural...Vibhuti Bhandarkarhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00145588190836915806noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3010516876243855590.post-19878311201382155632015-06-22T10:51:22.259+05:302015-06-22T10:51:22.259+05:30Thankyou so much for taking time out to read Vikas...Thankyou so much for taking time out to read Vikas Khair.<br />So happy to know my story could keep you engaged.<br />ATB for BAT55<br />Cheers<br />Vibhuti Bhandarkarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00145588190836915806noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3010516876243855590.post-43953488726571970692015-06-22T10:47:32.536+05:302015-06-22T10:47:32.536+05:30Welcome to my blog Vinayaka Vidhya,
And hope my st...Welcome to my blog Vinayaka Vidhya,<br />And hope my story and posts have you visiting me more often in the future..:)<br />Sarav is one of the very first few friends Id made in the blogosphere.<br />And Im happy that BAT is as rocking as ever...<br />ATB to you too for BAT55<br />Cheers<br />Vibz<br /><br />Vibhuti Bhandarkarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00145588190836915806noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3010516876243855590.post-5382896476683140362015-06-21T23:22:34.132+05:302015-06-21T23:22:34.132+05:30Superb little sorry a long tale :) but worth it .....Superb little sorry a long tale :) but worth it .. once I started I couldn't stop. Such a lovely and descriptive story. All the Best for the BAT.<br /><br /><a href="http://vikaskhair.blogspot.in/2015/06/memories.html" rel="nofollow">Vikas Khair - Memories</a>Vikas Khairhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10732792647915064715noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3010516876243855590.post-45814427759361614382015-06-20T14:43:52.070+05:302015-06-20T14:43:52.070+05:30This is very different take on the prompt, though ...This is very different take on the prompt, though a bit long, still I loved it so much. I am a new reader, and I must say, I enjoyed your take. Having heard a lot about your writing skills from Sarav, I must say that you are genius writer.<br /><br />All the very best for BAT!<br /><br /><a href="http://homemess.blogspot.in/2015/06/rain-rain-stay-while.html" rel="nofollow">Vidhya</a>Vidhya Saravanakumarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11632196886699194119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3010516876243855590.post-59807495397395992572015-06-19T13:05:58.297+05:302015-06-19T13:05:58.297+05:30Thankyou so much Aativas.
Hope to get back to read...Thankyou so much Aativas.<br />Hope to get back to reading and commenting on each other's blogs once again!<br />ATB for BAT55<br />Vibhuti Bhandarkarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00145588190836915806noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3010516876243855590.post-78510008329211153472015-06-18T20:08:17.421+05:302015-06-18T20:08:17.421+05:30Engaging story with mystic touch!Engaging story with mystic touch!aativashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10637505515780080897noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3010516876243855590.post-75485202342954865092015-06-18T12:00:00.360+05:302015-06-18T12:00:00.360+05:30Thankyou Cifar, for stopping by! Obliged...:)
Dea...Thankyou Cifar, for stopping by! Obliged...:)<br /><br />Dear Panchali, <br />Its heart warming to know that you enjoyed the little bits of details Id woven into the story. Thankyou so much for writing such a lovely response. You just made my day! Do visit more often..:) XO<br /><br />Dear Namrata, <br />I am flattered and humbled all at the same time , by your compliments.<br />I hope I can keep writing more such stories for you.<br />Looking forward to hearing from you again. <br />Thankyou so much ..<br />XOXO<br /><br />Hahhaha Megha, <br />Thankyou so much for reading with suh keen interest. It is the greatest compliment a writer could ever get! The fact that you are curious to know makes me dance around in glee.<br />Vithoji has walked into a surreal trap! God knows, what's happened to him?!!!<br /><br />Reiterated thanks and warm regards, <br />Vibz<br /> Vibhuti Bhandarkarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00145588190836915806noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3010516876243855590.post-90514861546737406372015-06-18T07:43:40.558+05:302015-06-18T07:43:40.558+05:30Hi Vibhuti,
Kudos to you for your professional wr...Hi Vibhuti,<br /><br />Kudos to you for your professional writing! You have a very different writing style..and I could see these characters in front of my eyes and was trying to imagine the story. It is indeed a gripping tale! <br />I want to know something, sorry for being so curious- So, did Vithoji consume poison in the food..was that girl a ghost..? He was no more alive and that is why he was able to hear her too..God I have so many questions in my mind! <br />You will see me around.. :) <br /><br />Absolutely loved your choice of words and narration! <br /><br />Regards,<br />Megha.Meghahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08562360286556697638noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3010516876243855590.post-14046244920581042572015-06-17T23:41:37.382+05:302015-06-17T23:41:37.382+05:30You are a genius and this is a masterpiece. I woul...You are a genius and this is a masterpiece. I would like to read more of your short stories. All the best for BAT. BAT made me stop by your post and I am happy about it.<br /><br />Read my BAT entry and share your words at: <br /><a href="http://www.namratakumari.com/2015/06/when-it-rains-outside-tears-pour-within.html2" rel="nofollow">When it rains outside, tears pour within...</a> :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03138707352343274950noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3010516876243855590.post-49498427460332389662015-06-17T13:55:08.714+05:302015-06-17T13:55:08.714+05:30That was truly absorbing...My visuals are full on,...That was truly absorbing...My visuals are full on, complete scenes, different angles, smells ..Ummmmm, enjoyed reading!!Loved the way the story concluded..and of course, the description of the lofty courtyard and the embellished wall was absolutely first class. ☺<br />This would linger in my mind for days...thank you!!<br />ATV for BAT....<br />Panchalihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08832164041967778122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3010516876243855590.post-45883911646181598582015-06-16T18:41:34.921+05:302015-06-16T18:41:34.921+05:30nice story, enjoyed it
My Blogaton55 post The Mon...nice story, enjoyed it<br /><br />My Blogaton55 post <a href="http://cifarshayar.blogspot.com/2015/06/the-monsoon-pain.html" rel="nofollow">The Monsoon Pain</a> Cifarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03435254563163870510noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3010516876243855590.post-44136828393955866342015-06-16T18:26:59.249+05:302015-06-16T18:26:59.249+05:30Hii Nivedita,
Thankyou for dropping by and Im so ...Hii Nivedita, <br />Thankyou for dropping by and Im so happy you did read Vithoji's story till his end. Oops! I meant till the end..;)<br />Vibhuti Bhandarkarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00145588190836915806noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3010516876243855590.post-17754472332830173352015-06-16T15:00:48.174+05:302015-06-16T15:00:48.174+05:30beautifully narrated.. i was at the edge of my sea...beautifully narrated.. i was at the edge of my seat thinking of ways for him to escape.. :DNivedita Chirantanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08913092002722637600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3010516876243855590.post-30130900293133710232015-06-16T11:55:43.320+05:302015-06-16T11:55:43.320+05:30You just made my day Haritha!
Thankyou so much for...You just made my day Haritha!<br />Thankyou so much for your sweet compliment.<br />Writing a short story after ages and your comment re-instills my faith in writing more.<br />Cheers!Vibhuti Bhandarkarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00145588190836915806noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3010516876243855590.post-30286945226868891042015-06-16T10:18:49.957+05:302015-06-16T10:18:49.957+05:30OMG! You had just taken me to an entirely differen...OMG! You had just taken me to an entirely different world through your writing Vibhuti. I loved how you described the minutest of the details with such penache. You have just got another follower for your blog! :)Thoughts Synchronizedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04447982335431424332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3010516876243855590.post-9276602440796317832015-06-15T22:10:05.005+05:302015-06-15T22:10:05.005+05:30Thankyou so much Sarav,
So very very happy to know...Thankyou so much Sarav,<br />So very very happy to know that you took the time out to read it all.<br />I was worried that its a bit long for submitting as a BAT entry.<br />Thankyou so much for your wishes.<br />Cheers for BAT55Vibhuti Bhandarkarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00145588190836915806noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3010516876243855590.post-66716138250940580972015-06-15T22:08:32.803+05:302015-06-15T22:08:32.803+05:30Thankyou so much Gunjan,
Such a fantastic complime...Thankyou so much Gunjan,<br />Such a fantastic compliment from a great writer like you, is indeed a feather in the cap for me!<br />Really touched to read your words...<br />You give me hope for pursuing my passion!<br />Thanks a ton!<br /><br />Vibhuti Bhandarkarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00145588190836915806noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3010516876243855590.post-71597610859076432662015-06-15T17:58:43.311+05:302015-06-15T17:58:43.311+05:30This is a masterpiece, Vibz! The way you started n...This is a masterpiece, Vibz! The way you started narating Vithoji and Henry White's meet, then the findings, the climax, and everything else... just awesome! <br /><br />Keep writing for BAT! Good luck to you!<br /><br /><a href="http://www.fewmiles.info/2015/06/the-rain.html" rel="nofollow">Someone is Special</a><br /><br />Someone is Specialhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16271391140125090742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3010516876243855590.post-23798279337013388952015-06-15T11:05:11.659+05:302015-06-15T11:05:11.659+05:30Thankyou Megha,
For reading till the end and for ...Thankyou Megha, <br />For reading till the end and for the compliment too!<br />Greatly appreciated..:)Vibhuti Bhandarkarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00145588190836915806noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3010516876243855590.post-39875732662040359762015-06-15T08:53:59.095+05:302015-06-15T08:53:59.095+05:30Charming, intriguing and fascinating. You weave a ...Charming, intriguing and fascinating. You weave a magical old world scene with your words, with a dream- like quality. It strangely reminds me of the bedtime stories I used to hear from my granny, and has the pull of a well- loved dog eared book. That you have Banaras in this hauntingly beautiful piece is a bonus. <br />All the best for BAT.Bringing Up Cocohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05303281326662392942noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3010516876243855590.post-29746081889096615072015-06-14T19:49:19.919+05:302015-06-14T19:49:19.919+05:30So it's the woman who's the enchanter.. bu...So it's the woman who's the enchanter.. but its unfair to Vithoji, he was just being ambitious.. <br /><br />Nice thriller, I like it :) Meghahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08456122349556682811noreply@blogger.com