tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3010516876243855590.post436183024982701532..comments2024-03-23T14:02:34.764+05:30Comments on Klishmaklaver: #14 Embarking on a new journeyVibhuti Bhandarkarhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00145588190836915806noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3010516876243855590.post-40577372918334638592010-07-15T09:21:46.761+05:302010-07-15T09:21:46.761+05:30Hey Gyanban,
Im extremely thankful and obliged tha...Hey Gyanban,<br />Im extremely thankful and obliged that you have analysed and reviewed this story series for me.<br />Your words have really contributed a lot to building my confidence in my writing skills.<br />Yes, you are absolutely right. It isnt easy to keep track of all the details through the series and I have worked hard to avoid slip-ups.<br />This comment of yours is like a pay-back for my hard work.<br />I always await feedbacks from you and two other blogger friends who promptly show me my ups and downs.<br />I see that from here I will only have to work harder to make this story stand-up to the quality you expect!<br />Reiterated Thanks<br />VibzVibhuti Bhandarkarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00145588190836915806noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3010516876243855590.post-76314372938744873442010-07-14T19:36:54.704+05:302010-07-14T19:36:54.704+05:30Good progress from 8 -14.
In parts 8-10 the intro...Good progress from 8 -14.<br /><br />In parts 8-10 the introduction of crimes of passion was very interesting , the scene construct was detailed and the pain and emotions were captured beautifully.<br /><br />In parts - 11-13 - i thought the pace slackened a bit, not much content progressed, in fact was thinking this could be one episode instead of two. The poems were certainly the highlight and they were well woven.<br /><br />Part 14, was by far the better part,as there was momentum,delivery and an element of unknown, something to look forward for the next episodes. The scene construct was nicely done.The characters have taken a definitive format and personality .<br /><br />Overall - I think this story is spanning a generation is turning out to be one of your better works till date.It is extremely tough to maintain so many variables, nitty-gritties from episode 1 -14,and thats what makes it even better. Kudos.aayanmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14881273343571611950noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3010516876243855590.post-70822942890307772872010-07-13T15:09:01.947+05:302010-07-13T15:09:01.947+05:30story mein twist!!
good going!!story mein twist!!<br /><br />good going!!magiceyehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17848851692951192508noreply@blogger.com