Jun 8, 2010

Palindrome Naisaiku #3

Phot courtesy http://www.chiark.greenend.org.uk/


Pitter patter pitter

Big and beautiful

Down pour raindrops

Pitter Patter Pitter

Raindrops pour down

Beautiful and big

Pitter patter pitter


Its the 69th week of the Naisaiku Challenge!

19 comments:

Manna said...

That's cute.. :) and beautiful just lyk you.. :)

phoenixritu said...

Nice, just discovered what a NaiSaiKu was. Novel idea

vibhutib said...

Thanku Ritu Di..:D Its just for fun!

megz said...

wwaaahhh masstttt.... :D
mujeee beee naisaiku sikhaaaooooo :(

Rumya said...

HeeHee...Someone is DISQUS-ing too!!! :D
Pitter Patter Pitter
Love I That Naisaiku
WOW
Naisaiku that I love
Pitter Patter Pitter!!! ;)

Vivek said...

You are turning to be the queen of the Palindromic Poetry, Kudos :-)

Sushobhan said...

Hey nice.. I have read a palindrome previously also.. Lovely..:)

vibhutib said...

Thanks Sushobhan,
am in the learning phase..hope to get better

vibhutib said...

My Naisaiku Mentor is here..Glad U wow' ed it! :D Happppy

vibhutib said...

Megzy fr veteran poets like u this shud b haath ka mayl..hehehe..its just for fun yaar..gtalk hai na..Naisaiku chat for 2mnts and ull b the master in a jiffy! :D

vibhutib said...

Thanks Vivek, I knw I find it very challenging and FUN..bt no Queen yaar..jst a learner still! :D

vibhutib said...

Thanks Manna, Did u visualise ur kids in the rain too? :D

Andy Sewina said...

Wow! I can feel the splatter! of the pitter patter...

Thanks for posting to The NaiSaiKu Challenge? I'm really enjoying reading your stuff!!

˙·٠•●❤Sh@KiR@ ❤●•٠·˙ said...

very lovely ....I can hear the pitter patter too. WOW..
here is here
have you a great week.
hugs
shakira

Siddhesh 'Ravan' Kabe said...

ha ha....it sounded like a limerick!!!

magiceye said...

that was lovely!!

Bikramjit said...

vibhzyyyyyyy cha gaye tusin taan.. kya yaad karwaya

makes me remember the days when we splashed in the rain Pitter Patter Pitter
spalash splash splash :)

Sayak Shome said...

Lovely :) Japanese poetry is amazing. I'd written a few Haikus for my brother once. One thing about your naisaiku though; it doesn't follow the syllable rule, does it? I don't know, I might be wrong, I am just a novice at writing poetry.

Sayak Shome said...

Lovely :) Japanese poetry is amazing. I'd written a few Haikus for my brother once. One thing about your naisaiku though; it doesn't follow the syllable rule, does it? I don't know, I might be wrong, I am just a novice at writing poetry.