Ill Wind

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Image Copyrights: Vibhuti B
 I'm
Left
Lonely

Wounded
In
Never-ending
Darkness

This Acrostic has been written for the Acrostics Only Prompt 5: Challenge & OSI prompt : 137

Comments

Nanka said…
Awww....That poor stranded, wounded dragon fly!! :)
Bravo, you did it!!
Oct 13, 2010, 12:06:00 PM
Tall Girl in Japan said…
Beautifully written. Especially because its a acrostic !
Oct 13, 2010, 12:33:00 PM
Linda Jones Malonson said…
Ouch! That is indeed and "ill wind" .. here's hoping you get some "healing wind" soon, and let's hope there is light so you can find your way out of darkness. Very good take on the prompt.
Oct 13, 2010, 12:49:00 PM
Vibhuti Bhandarkar said…
Nanka, Thanku soo much. Its You who has done a good job at keying me up to pick up my 'Quill' again! :D
Oct 13, 2010, 1:39:00 PM
Vibhuti Bhandarkar said…
@ Ruchira: Thanku. yes, its quite challenging to do a single word acrostic

@ Amias: Thanku for the sweet words but it isnt my story. i was just imagining the plight of the stranded dragonfly. Thats all. I am absolutely fine my friend..:D
Oct 13, 2010, 1:43:00 PM
Bikram said…
dont know the type of peotry but sad seems sad ...


Bikram's
Oct 13, 2010, 5:41:00 PM
bollywoodstylediaries said…
beautiful and very vivid!!
Oct 14, 2010, 12:49:00 AM
Amity said…
wow...beautifully KISSed Vhibs!

oh you could really write very good acros, i want some more of it...;-)
Oct 16, 2010, 6:00:00 AM
Sonshu said…
Wow, I liked it!
It was beautifully written! :)
Oct 16, 2010, 4:26:00 PM
Yamini Meduri said…
wow...perfect take on the prompt...loved it..!!!
Oct 23, 2010, 2:34:00 PM
Lost in thoughts said…
What a pic...very nice
Oct 27, 2010, 2:08:00 PM
Sonshu said…
Wow, I liked it!
It was beautifully written! :)
Nov 4, 2010, 11:31:00 AM
Vibhuti B said…
Nanka, Thanku soo much. Its You who has done a good job at keying me up to pick up my 'Quill' again! :D
Nov 4, 2010, 11:31:00 AM
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