O for Overwhelming


Image borrowed from http://wuliaonanhai.blogspot.com/

Days on Nights
Young hearts beating
Overwhelming feelings
 Nights on Days
Feelings overwhelming
Beating hearts, young
 Days on Nights
Euphoric infatuation
sleepless restless
Nights on Days
Restless sleepless
Infatuation euphoric
Days on Nights

This has been written to welcome the return of THE NAISAIKU CHALLENGE!
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Comments

Nanka said…
That was an excellent piece Vibzz!!

But please sleep well and don't be restless.

I know you have a pair of birds flying there soon ;)

LOL :D

I'm going on a short vacation, be back soon!! Some of my scheduled posts will show up but I may not be able to comment on your posts. Hope to catch up when I get back!! :)

Take care of those exotic birds flying in!! :D

Mwaaaahzzzz!!! :D

~Nanka & Rumzz!! :D
Tanvi said…
I like! :) Beauty in contradiction!
Andy Sewina said…
Hiya, well thought out, and I love the way you did the palindrome!

Sorry we've not been around all summer, but we're back in town now!!

Thanks for taking the NaiSaiKu Challenge?!!!
wow, u are gifted!! i cant put two words together!!
Sylvia K said…
Gifted you are! And what a great post for the O Day! Hope your week goes well!

Sylvia
i understand restless all too well

ROG, ABC Wednesday team
magiceye said…
lovely!
perfect for navratri!!
Thankyou everybody for appreciating this experimental style of poetry I churned out.
I feel really motivated by all your sweet words of appreciation...
Thanks a ton!
XOXOXOXO
wow beautiful play of words and loved the way it flowed on piece of paper.great post i must say.
mrsnesbitt said…
Wow! It is so encouraging to read posts like yours - truly inspirational and so creative - a real ABC follower!
Thanks so much for contributing such a well thought out post. I really appreciate the hard work and thinking behind it.

Denise
ABC Team
mrsnesbitt said…
Wow! It is so encouraging to read posts like yours - truly inspirational and so creative - a real ABC follower!
Thanks so much for contributing such a well thought out post. I really appreciate the hard work and thinking behind it.

Denise
ABC Team
wow beautiful play of words and loved the way it flowed on piece of paper.great post i must say.
i understand restless all too well

ROG, ABC Wednesday team
Sylvia K said…
Gifted you are! And what a great post for the O Day! Hope your week goes well!

Sylvia
Andy Sewina said…
Hiya, well thought out, and I love the way you did the palindrome!

Sorry we've not been around all summer, but we're back in town now!!

Thanks for taking the NaiSaiKu Challenge?!!!
Tanvi said…
I like! :) Beauty in contradiction!

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