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Early in the morning, knock- knocks

McDonald pulled up his socks

"Pray who is that?” cried he

Tis the farmhand kitty

Your coop hasn't anymore, hens or cocks


This has been written forPrompt # 8 : Acrostic Limerick




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Comments

Rumya said…
Naughty Naughty Kitty!! Shame on you!!! :P
Lovely limerick Vibzzz.....LOL :D
Nanka said…
Hey Vibzzz,
You are a born LOL :D
Such a beautiful limerick and I can picture your face when the kitty came to tell you that.. ;)
It reminds me of Udhi reporting to you about a mischief accomplished. :D
Very cleverly combined acrostic limerick!! Loved it!!
Hey RUMZ and NANKA,
Thanku sooo much. This was my first attempt at a limerick and I was waiting for a response from you'll. Wasn't sure whether this one was funny enough. BUT
The way you'll visualised it was all the more funny..I'm ROFLing in fact at the thought of Udhi aka kitty gobbling up all the chikaan.
Rumya said…
On behalf of the Cap'n on shore and crew at The Laughter Ship....Welcome Aboard!! :D Hope ye have a hearty cruise...!!

Err....Where be yer bottle o' Rum?? Let's have a rollicking time!! :D
Vee said…
Lovely Vibhuti. nice selection of pic, loved the evil smile on the kitty's face. :D
Amity said…
very very clever one Vhibs! i liked the idea you've tried to send across!

keep on penning beautiful acros like this one Vhibs!
Good one Vibhuti, LOL.

Awaiting more limerick posts from you,

Vivek
Yamini Meduri said…
hehehe..!! nice one..!! LOL
the best limerick i read in this series..Nice one
Jim said…
Very nice Limerick and real funny! Poor Mr. McDonald, no chickens!

You have me wondering, did the Mrs. sell them or did a chicken hawk or a fox get them?

I tried one (acrostic limerick) but, well, ...
Maybe I shouldn't have. :)
..
Jim said…
Very nice Limerick and real funny! Poor Mr. McDonald, no chickens!

You have me wondering, did the Mrs. sell them or did a chicken hawk or a fox get them?

I tried one (acrostic limerick) but, well, ...
Maybe I shouldn't have. :)
..
Rumya said…
Naughty Naughty Kitty!! Shame on you!!! :P
Lovely limerick Vibzzz.....LOL :D
Amias said…
Now this is too funny, loved that suggested ending!
vibhutib said…
lol..glad you fund it funny. I was wondering whether THAT suggested ending does have an impact! :D
thankyou Amias...

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