Serenity


The Sea's tide sings
But serenity for me
Is mother's lap


Written for

Prompt : Serenity

Comments

Nanka said…
That was the nicest feeling of serenity. Nothing more peaceful and serene than a good snooze on mother's lap :)
Great Haiku Vibzz!!! :D
Hope to read you more...
great! liked it with the picture!
Rumya said…
I know exactly what your saying... :D and it was not very long ago either...
Unknown said…
Wow, that was so intense n touching. Nicely expressed, just few words and you described the motherhood completely with them.
Uma Anandane said…
Very true..its the powerful serenity for all humans!
Anonymous said…
aawwww...Vibbzzyyyy..thats jus soooo truee :D
nothin like layin the head on mumma's lap :D
Wow...it's just beautiful the image in the haiku as well as the pic...that's exactly where serenity clamors...:)
Jingle said…
it makes me smile.
very sense making for a mother and a baby.
You have weaved perfect words here my friend, loved it xx
Amity said…
wow Vhibs, loved it! So serene it is!

Am back after a typhoon in our place...;-) am in ofis, sneaking, no net and power at home!

Good morning! ;-) i'll check on your limerick too!
Jingle said…
it makes me smile.
very sense making for a mother and a baby.
buttercup said…
You have weaved perfect words here my friend, loved it xx

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