Self conscious or self confident?

Appraising my self
for dabbling in those risks
Utter stupidity

They see a lean fool
 As I wait for time to tell
Patient and still

This has been written for

Prompt #22: Self

Three Word Wednesday: dabble, lean, utter

Prompt # 147: Stillness





Comments

Nanka said…
Great combination of the prompts and well done too!
marousia said…
Nice writing :)
Fiveloaf said…
great!
Fiveloaf said…
mines here- http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/01/23/painted-hallways/
Sumit Sarkar said…
Lovely haikus...
very good use of the prompts.. :)
Ramesh Sood said…
As I wait for time to tell
Patient and still

Wish I had learnt it earlier.. anyways.. life is still very beautiful..
Victoria said…
There is a lot in these two simple verses. I think we all know the feeling of messing up something and waiting to discover the consequences. Have a happy week.
Jingle said…
brilliant work...
well put.
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Tumblewords said…
Terrific! Patient and still - yes!
TweetyShwe said…
well done vibz...this was great :)
Bikram said…
you tell them girl... yayyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
patience is a virtue which i dont have any
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time will tell,
patience is important..
lovely Haiku.
Wonderful Vibz.. Nicely written..

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Jagdishbali said…
Very siccinctly but superbly written.
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