O for Overwhelming

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Image borrowed from http://wuliaonanhai.blogspot.com/

Days on Nights
Young hearts beating
Overwhelming feelings
 Nights on Days
Feelings overwhelming
Beating hearts, young
 Days on Nights
Euphoric infatuation
sleepless restless
Nights on Days
Restless sleepless
Infatuation euphoric
Days on Nights

This has been written to welcome the return of THE NAISAIKU CHALLENGE!
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Comments

Nanka said…
That was an excellent piece Vibzz!!

But please sleep well and don't be restless.

I know you have a pair of birds flying there soon ;)

LOL :D

I'm going on a short vacation, be back soon!! Some of my scheduled posts will show up but I may not be able to comment on your posts. Hope to catch up when I get back!! :)

Take care of those exotic birds flying in!! :D

Mwaaaahzzzz!!! :D

~Nanka & Rumzz!! :D
Oct 26, 2010, 1:52:00 PM
Tanvi said…
I like! :) Beauty in contradiction!
Oct 26, 2010, 2:53:00 PM
Andy Sewina said…
Hiya, well thought out, and I love the way you did the palindrome!

Sorry we've not been around all summer, but we're back in town now!!

Thanks for taking the NaiSaiKu Challenge?!!!
Oct 26, 2010, 5:13:00 PM
bollywoodstylediaries said…
wow, u are gifted!! i cant put two words together!!
Oct 26, 2010, 11:01:00 PM
Sylvia K said…
Gifted you are! And what a great post for the O Day! Hope your week goes well!

Sylvia
Oct 26, 2010, 11:10:00 PM
Roger Owen Green said…
i understand restless all too well

ROG, ABC Wednesday team
Oct 27, 2010, 4:47:00 AM
magiceye said…
lovely!
perfect for navratri!!
Oct 27, 2010, 9:12:00 AM
Vibhuti Bhandarkar said…
Thankyou everybody for appreciating this experimental style of poetry I churned out.
I feel really motivated by all your sweet words of appreciation...
Thanks a ton!
XOXOXOXO
Oct 27, 2010, 9:38:00 AM
Dr. Pratibha Singh said…
wow beautiful play of words and loved the way it flowed on piece of paper.great post i must say.
Oct 28, 2010, 7:11:00 PM
mrsnesbitt said…
Wow! It is so encouraging to read posts like yours - truly inspirational and so creative - a real ABC follower!
Thanks so much for contributing such a well thought out post. I really appreciate the hard work and thinking behind it.

Denise
ABC Team
Oct 29, 2010, 10:14:00 PM
mrsnesbitt said…
Wow! It is so encouraging to read posts like yours - truly inspirational and so creative - a real ABC follower!
Thanks so much for contributing such a well thought out post. I really appreciate the hard work and thinking behind it.

Denise
ABC Team
Nov 4, 2010, 11:30:00 AM
Pratibha The Talent said…
wow beautiful play of words and loved the way it flowed on piece of paper.great post i must say.
Nov 4, 2010, 11:30:00 AM
Roger Owen Green said…
i understand restless all too well

ROG, ABC Wednesday team
Nov 4, 2010, 11:30:00 AM
Sylvia K said…
Gifted you are! And what a great post for the O Day! Hope your week goes well!

Sylvia
Nov 4, 2010, 11:30:00 AM
Andy Sewina said…
Hiya, well thought out, and I love the way you did the palindrome!

Sorry we've not been around all summer, but we're back in town now!!

Thanks for taking the NaiSaiKu Challenge?!!!
Nov 4, 2010, 11:30:00 AM
Tanvi said…
I like! :) Beauty in contradiction!
Nov 4, 2010, 11:30:00 AM
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