WOW

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When evening breeze blows
Oh! how romantic it is
Wistful, mellow, its tickling


Have begun blogging again and heres my first Acrostic Haiku for the month of March, posted for





Innovative Prompt C: WOW


and



Breeze, Mellow, Tickle

Comments

Nanka said…
Wow!! what a feeling when a cool light breeze caresses affectionately, blowing little wisps of hair over the face. Very well done Vibzz and you have combined the two prompts beautifully!!
Mar 18, 2011, 6:00:00 PM
Nanka said…
PS: I just realized that you have miscalculated the syllable count for the haiku. Maybe since you have long time no ku-ed! ;)
Mar 18, 2011, 11:10:00 PM
The Poetry Bin said…
Thanks for writing - I enjoyed the read ;)

The Poetry Bin
Mar 18, 2011, 11:32:00 PM
Vivek said…
Glad to see you back, hope things are good.
Mar 19, 2011, 12:26:00 AM
The Fool said…
Very skilly fully done. Good to see you back blogging. Interestingly even I have taken to poetry these days. Not tried acrostic yet though. Tried a Sonnet and a tanka.
Mar 19, 2011, 12:50:00 AM
Jingle said…
wow,
love this...
Mar 19, 2011, 6:03:00 AM
Vibhuti B said…
Thankyou Jingle, heartening to hear from you. tells me ive done right by coming back! :D
Mar 19, 2011, 8:48:00 AM
Vibhuti B said…
Hey nice to see you here man!
Glad that I have made a come back at blogging when uve begun to write too..
More to relish I see..
:D
Whats a Tanka?
Coming over to find out!
Mar 19, 2011, 8:49:00 AM
Vibhuti B said…
Hey Vivek,
Ive been good yaar!
Hows you...
Yeah! Its been quite a long time and I'm happy that Ive come back too..:D
Mar 19, 2011, 8:50:00 AM
Vibhuti B said…
Thanks for visiting..:D Appreciate it!
Mar 19, 2011, 8:50:00 AM
Vibhuti B said…
Thankyou Anshul..:D
Mar 19, 2011, 8:50:00 AM
Vibhuti B said…
Thankyou Nanka,
both for the compliment and for pointing out the error..
You see, brain rusts if its not put to work for a long while!!!
Thats just my case, looks like!
Heeheeehee
Mar 19, 2011, 8:51:00 AM
Vibhuti B said…
Hey Thankyou Nanka,
for both the compliment and pointing out the error.
I guess the brain does rust if not put to work over a long period of time..
;) Trying to get back on track! :D
Mar 19, 2011, 10:27:00 AM
The Fool said…
Do look forward to your comments on my 2 poems. I found this wonderful site http://onestoppoetry.com/ that explains tankas, haikus, triolets, vilanelle and various other poetry forms taking up a different one every week. Finidng it very interesting and presenters are very knowledgeable about the history of the form and not just the rhymes and syllables but also the kind of themes and how to structure.
Mar 19, 2011, 11:09:00 AM
Amanda Moore said…
very nice acrostic/haiku it reminds me of honeysuckle and evening walks hmmmmm
Mar 21, 2011, 10:34:00 PM
Sheilagh Lee said…
this is painting a lovely picture
Mar 22, 2011, 12:34:00 AM
Jingle Poetry said…
Greetings:

Week 27 Poetry Potluck is open, welcome/Thanks (4) joining us…share your poetry with us today…

Friendship Awards, Enjoy!

Happy Monday,
Bless you!
xxx
Mar 22, 2011, 1:20:00 AM
Highland Lass3 said…
hmmmm great..... deep!


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Mar 24, 2011, 7:03:00 PM
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