You are turning to be the queen of the Palindromic Poetry, Kudos :-)
Sushobhan said…
Hey nice.. I have read a palindrome previously also.. Lovely..:)
vibhutib said…
Thanks Sushobhan, am in the learning phase..hope to get better
vibhutib said…
My Naisaiku Mentor is here..Glad U wow' ed it! :D Happppy
vibhutib said…
Megzy fr veteran poets like u this shud b haath ka mayl..hehehe..its just for fun yaar..gtalk hai na..Naisaiku chat for 2mnts and ull b the master in a jiffy! :D
vibhutib said…
Thanks Vivek, I knw I find it very challenging and FUN..bt no Queen yaar..jst a learner still! :D
vibhutib said…
Thanks Manna, Did u visualise ur kids in the rain too? :D
Lovely :) Japanese poetry is amazing. I'd written a few Haikus for my brother once. One thing about your naisaiku though; it doesn't follow the syllable rule, does it? I don't know, I might be wrong, I am just a novice at writing poetry.
Lovely :) Japanese poetry is amazing. I'd written a few Haikus for my brother once. One thing about your naisaiku though; it doesn't follow the syllable rule, does it? I don't know, I might be wrong, I am just a novice at writing poetry.
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am in the learning phase..hope to get better
Thanks for posting to The NaiSaiKu Challenge? I'm really enjoying reading your stuff!!
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