Metamorphosis

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Metamorphosis
The role of evolution.
The state of fruition.

Metamorphosis
Life altering change it brings.
Fly away butterfly!


Experimenting with Haiku. Can a Haiku poem be written in two stanzas? or is that a big NONO?

Comments

Gemma Mira Wiseman aka Pamela Adams said…
(I also wrote two haikus complementing one another!)

Especially love the first haiku representing a series of "wisdoms"!

Lovely ideas!
Aug 1, 2010, 6:32:00 AM
Vinay Leo R. said…
simple & beautiful haikus both :) welcome back to HH, Vibz :) cute picture too..!
Aug 1, 2010, 9:09:00 AM
Unapologetic Confessions said…
Hi there.. I so much love this form of poetry.. I dabble around to write a few sometimes myself. Your Haiku is very nice.. Do write more... If you want to do read the ones I had dabbled with - Cheers

http://unapologeticconfessions.blogspot.com/2007/08/haiku.html
http://unapologeticconfessions.blogspot.com/2007/08/haiku-2.html
Aug 2, 2010, 11:29:00 AM
"just a pen in my hand" said…
hey , nice....dnt knw much abt haiku , but i gues wud hv to come bk n see hw far u hv gone wid ur experiment...keep up te good work...tc
Aug 2, 2010, 12:32:00 PM
RGB said…
5-7-5 syllables in 3 units is what it says, and looks like you got your haiku just right! Would love to see more of your experiments...
Aug 3, 2010, 2:38:00 PM
"just a pen in my hand" said…
hey , nice....dnt knw much abt haiku , but i gues wud hv to come bk n see hw far u hv gone wid ur experiment...keep up te good work...tc
Nov 4, 2010, 11:31:00 AM
UnApologetic Confessions said…
Hi there.. I so much love this form of poetry.. I dabble around to write a few sometimes myself. Your Haiku is very nice.. Do write more... If you want to do read the ones I had dabbled with - Cheers

http://unapologeticconfessions.blogspot.com/2007/08/haiku.html
http://unapologeticconfessions.blogspot.com/2007/08/haiku-2.html
Nov 4, 2010, 11:31:00 AM
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