First Steps








For that priceless moment
I waited all alert
Right when he began
So slowly and steadily
Tottering little feet came

Step by step baby
Tried walking to mumma
Each step towards me
Pleasure felt beyond words
Soaked in the moment


This has been written for the Acrostics Only prompt # 6
and the Z-A in 26 Days Challenge at ' I Rhyme Without Reason'

Comments

Shail said…
Aww... so heart warming a moment! :)
swati said…
coool vibzzyy.....very neatly written!!
D2 said…
Lovely poem. It describes the moment perfectly. :)
Tweety said…
must have been a very proud moment for you...my first steps acrostic is also a tribute to all you parents :D :) lovely explains the best..
Leo said…
he's so adorable, Vibz.. Casper's first steps would've been memorable.. and he skipped the next step and began to run? :)
Rumya said…
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww........................ :D <3 <3
Udhi looking champu....when did the beautiful curls that he now has come?? :D
Nanka said…
Priceless photograph of the little one!!! We hadn't seen him at this stage.... :( Glad you have those million photos for us to see!! :D
Rajlakshmi said…
awww thats a cute post ... beautiful photograph :D
Amity said…
Oh this made me reminisce those days when my kids took their first steps...now they're all grown up and taking a more complicated steps towards life!

Well done Vhibs!!!
ljm (Amias) said…
I remember when each of my children took their first steps, but it was hard when those steps took them to adulthood, and into their own world. Still, it was so very bittersweet.
vibhutib said…
Isnt it an Awwwwesome moment Amity? This prompt has been such a wonderful thing, giving us all a chance to write about that precious moment of our lives..:)
vibhutib said…
Awww Amias, really I dread my son growing up and walking away from mumma too...So I soak in these beautiful moments..:) Thanks for visiting my reminisces..You are sweet! :)
I could watch an advertisement in mind as I read this...in the ad a kid walks and its captured on handy cam...Nice acro

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