Zir-Conned!!!

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Fancy Zircons not diamonds?
Lies and half- truths!
Genuinity is scarce
Love is farce
 Fancy Zircons not Diamonds?
Farce is love
Scarce is genuinity
Half-truths and lies!
Diamonds not, Zircons fancy?



This has been written for the Z-A in 26 days Challenge @ I Rhyme Without Reason 
OSI prompt 140
and for the Naisaiku Challenge Nov 2010

Comments

Teresa said…
What a creative take on the prompt! I love it.
Nov 1, 2010, 4:47:00 AM
Vibhuti Bhandarkar said…
Thankyou Teresa,
Im glad my experimentation is clicking with my readers.
:D Hope to see your comments in the future too..TC
Nov 1, 2010, 8:36:00 AM
Jidhu Jose said…
oh..little bit complicated

check: http://jidhu.blogspot.com/2010/10/trip-to-my-aunts-house.html
Nov 1, 2010, 9:41:00 AM
Harshad Mehta said…
Isn't it a half truth either way??

Wonderful piece.
Nov 1, 2010, 5:17:00 PM
Vinay Leo R. said…
Beautiful experimentation, Vibz. its come out well.. but I'm not sure about the NaiSaiKu part.. the thought is well said :)

PS: PLEASE CHANGE YOUR TEMPLATE!! It doesn't suit you one bit!
Nov 1, 2010, 7:55:00 PM
bollywoodstylediaries said…
u are gifted..i cant write two sentences!! If I had to write something like this, I think i will give myself migraine:-)
Nov 1, 2010, 11:48:00 PM
Anonymous said…
As long as there's love behind the CZ's it's okay with me. Just tell me the truth. Nice one.
Victoria
http://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/2010/11/01/leonneyes-z-to-a-challenge-z-is-for-zayin/
Nov 2, 2010, 5:32:00 AM
Vibhuti Bhandarkar said…
@ Harshad Mehta: Half-truths with the intention of decieving can only be called lies! :(

@Leo: Thanks for the criticism. Am hunting for a change in template NOW. :))
I dint write it as typical Naisaiku euther! :D

@Sonali: Am extremely thankful for your sweet compliments time and again. And am happy you like my writing so much. But am an equal fan of urs. I can't do for nuts what you do so easily- criticise Fashion with panache!!!

@liv2write2day:
Couldn't agree with you more. As long as there's true love in it, I would settle for stones too!!! :D
XOXO
Nov 2, 2010, 9:34:00 AM
The Write Girl said…
Unique and creative take on the prompt. Hope you keep writing and perfecting your words!
Nov 3, 2010, 6:59:00 AM
Tweety said…
thats completely awsome...vibz havent read anything like that before...you prick my grey cells to experiment now..loved it :)
Nov 4, 2010, 12:13:00 AM
Tweety said…
thats completely awsome...vibz havent read anything like that before...you prick my grey cells to experiment now..loved it :)
Nov 4, 2010, 11:30:00 AM
Leo said…
Beautiful experimentation, Vibz. its come out well.. but I'm not sure about the NaiSaiKu part.. the thought is well said :)

PS: PLEASE CHANGE YOUR TEMPLATE!! It doesn't suit you one bit!
Nov 4, 2010, 11:30:00 AM
Jidhu Jose said…
oh..little bit complicated

check: http://jidhu.blogspot.com/2010/10/trip-to-my-aunts-house.html
Nov 4, 2010, 11:30:00 AM
Ramesh Sood said…
I think its true with every thing.. the way you wrote it.. keep inspiring dear..
A Happy Diwali to you dear..! Invite you to visit my page..
Nov 4, 2010, 5:49:00 PM
Myrna said…
Enjoyed reading your poem. It's creative and speaks the truth.
Nov 4, 2010, 8:20:00 PM
Beloved49 said…
Wonderful Naisaiku. Lovely words and images. Very clever.

Melanie
Nov 4, 2010, 9:36:00 PM
Amity said…
wow..wow...wow...I love this one Vhibs..:) a Naisaku? haven't done any yet...might try one soon, you inspire me...! :-) Nanka and Rumya must be there in your place already..say my warm regards to them and yes, Happy Diwali again! :-)
Nov 6, 2010, 2:07:00 PM
Nimue said…
i like this !! more so the form ! thank you :)
Dec 1, 2010, 5:00:00 AM
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