Zir-Conned!!!



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Fancy Zircons not diamonds?
Lies and half- truths!
Genuinity is scarce
Love is farce
 Fancy Zircons not Diamonds?
Farce is love
Scarce is genuinity
Half-truths and lies!
Diamonds not, Zircons fancy?



This has been written for the Z-A in 26 days Challenge @ I Rhyme Without Reason 
OSI prompt 140
and for the Naisaiku Challenge Nov 2010

Comments

Teresa said…
What a creative take on the prompt! I love it.
Thankyou Teresa,
Im glad my experimentation is clicking with my readers.
:D Hope to see your comments in the future too..TC
Jidhu Jose said…
oh..little bit complicated

check: http://jidhu.blogspot.com/2010/10/trip-to-my-aunts-house.html
Harshad Mehta said…
Isn't it a half truth either way??

Wonderful piece.
Vinay Leo R. said…
Beautiful experimentation, Vibz. its come out well.. but I'm not sure about the NaiSaiKu part.. the thought is well said :)

PS: PLEASE CHANGE YOUR TEMPLATE!! It doesn't suit you one bit!
u are gifted..i cant write two sentences!! If I had to write something like this, I think i will give myself migraine:-)
Anonymous said…
As long as there's love behind the CZ's it's okay with me. Just tell me the truth. Nice one.
Victoria
http://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/2010/11/01/leonneyes-z-to-a-challenge-z-is-for-zayin/
@ Harshad Mehta: Half-truths with the intention of decieving can only be called lies! :(

@Leo: Thanks for the criticism. Am hunting for a change in template NOW. :))
I dint write it as typical Naisaiku euther! :D

@Sonali: Am extremely thankful for your sweet compliments time and again. And am happy you like my writing so much. But am an equal fan of urs. I can't do for nuts what you do so easily- criticise Fashion with panache!!!

@liv2write2day:
Couldn't agree with you more. As long as there's true love in it, I would settle for stones too!!! :D
XOXO
The Write Girl said…
Unique and creative take on the prompt. Hope you keep writing and perfecting your words!
Tweety said…
thats completely awsome...vibz havent read anything like that before...you prick my grey cells to experiment now..loved it :)
Tweety said…
thats completely awsome...vibz havent read anything like that before...you prick my grey cells to experiment now..loved it :)
Leo said…
Beautiful experimentation, Vibz. its come out well.. but I'm not sure about the NaiSaiKu part.. the thought is well said :)

PS: PLEASE CHANGE YOUR TEMPLATE!! It doesn't suit you one bit!
Jidhu Jose said…
oh..little bit complicated

check: http://jidhu.blogspot.com/2010/10/trip-to-my-aunts-house.html
Ramesh Sood said…
I think its true with every thing.. the way you wrote it.. keep inspiring dear..
A Happy Diwali to you dear..! Invite you to visit my page..
Myrna said…
Enjoyed reading your poem. It's creative and speaks the truth.
Beloved49 said…
Wonderful Naisaiku. Lovely words and images. Very clever.

Melanie
Amity said…
wow..wow...wow...I love this one Vhibs..:) a Naisaku? haven't done any yet...might try one soon, you inspire me...! :-) Nanka and Rumya must be there in your place already..say my warm regards to them and yes, Happy Diwali again! :-)
Nimue said…
i like this !! more so the form ! thank you :)

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