Velvet

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Photograph courtesy: http://cameracrazy.hashout.org/
Behold the smooth fall
Like shining velvet on looms
Water flows down hill

this has been written for the Z-A in 26 Days Challenge at I Rhyme Without Reason

Comments

Leo said…
i like the comparison.. sunlight on waterfall does indeed look like velvet :D
Nov 5, 2010, 7:32:00 PM
Rajlakshmi said…
beautiful imagery ... wonderfully written.
Nov 5, 2010, 11:56:00 PM
vibhutib said…
Thankyou for your kind compliments. :)
Nov 6, 2010, 9:56:00 AM
vibhutib said…
A compliment and no criticism from such an accomplished poet!! I am sooooo happy..Thanku Leo..:D
Nov 6, 2010, 9:58:00 AM
Amity said…
wow...lovely photo that truly complimented those right verses!
Nov 6, 2010, 3:04:00 PM
vibhutib said…
Thankyou Amity. Am so happy to see that you are likeing what I write! :D
Nov 6, 2010, 4:11:00 PM
Nanka said…
Lovely similie here and such an apt picture too. Beautiful words to describe and must call you the Haiku Queen!!
Nov 15, 2010, 11:59:00 AM
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